Narrative Writing Assignment

NWA

Narrative Story- Kenneth Leveton 2

There wasn’t much to change in this one. The story remains exactly the same, along with its structure. The only problem lies in the first paragraph of the story. The first error is a grammatical mistake, where I end up adding a comma to complete a sentence structure. The second is me omitting a word to make the same sentence flow better.

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