Academic Writing Assignment


Videogame Media and Violence 2

The Academic Writing Assignment had a lot to work on, as most of it needed some clarity in explanation. The first things I changed adding more material in some phrases I use. “Much like today’s media” was altered to include actual media such as TV, movies, and literature to make it more clear. Also, I had to alter the titles of the articles, simplifying them to just “Article 1”, “Article 2”, and so on. Finally, I got rid of some grammatical mistakes to clear it up and in the conclusion, fixed the embarrassing typo from “theoretic” to therapeutic.


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